Waiting for her call.. thinking that she will be fine.. I m curious about whats goin thru her mind.. her thoughts make me restless.. her voice leaves me clueless.. her blind love confuses my senses.. my brain goes numb.. wishing well for her; wishing peace for her..
Waiting for her call.. my thoughts are are pleading on their knees ,' Clear your mind, isolate yourself.. cherish every moment.. happiness is searching for you… stop hiding , come in the open… see how sunshine welcomes u n embraces with its warmth arms wide open..'
Waiting for her call.. Seeing her pain brought a tear in these eyes.. I want to see her genuinely happy.. I want to see her dance.. free herself… I want her to smile .. and make the day brighter than it will ever be..
Waiting for her call.. the music plays as I sit helpless, hoping for the best.. cause hope is all I’ve got .. I want to do more .. that I will .. give me chance .. just call .. I’m listening..
well written....very clear n lucid !!
ReplyDeletewanna name d girl ?![:P]....hehe....cheers mate !
seriously man get a diary.. what on earth.. i didnt get head or tail of it except that some new fixation is upon u!
ReplyDeleteon the plus side the blog layout is nice... be very clear about what a third person might get out of ur post.
ReplyDeleteand ur english doesnt stink.. i guess St. John made u learn some stuff...
oyee...sahi likha hai bey..! straight from the heart,sincere n genuine..very sweet..!!keep writing dude
ReplyDeleteyou did a mistake dude, by giving the best in your first blog it would be difficult now to better this one.
ReplyDeletestill i hope you can.
u certainly do ve a way wid words i must say..good work....
ReplyDeleteI am at a loss for words!!
ReplyDeleteIt is with consummate ease that you have penned down your thoughts which makes me believe that this is an incident very close to your heart!
Hope laced with a tinge of melancholia always makes for an interesting read.
Way to go my friend and i hope many more anecdotes are in the offing.
P.S :- I know i am being too much of a purist but i feel that such a good article is robbed of its sheen by the usage of SMS lingo (eg- u n)in it.
Lage raho mere cheete....
kidhar se dhaapa
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